Yeah, I guess I got a little into "did i cover all the bases"-mode too much. I'll check those TOS's out! Thanks so much for your input, and I'll definitely give my TOS a good 2-3 or more condensing/editing passes.

EDIT: Whew! Edited it with your suggestions. I think it looks a lot better though can still be distilled or re-organized, maybe? I took out some stuff that I felt overcomplicated things for myself too. It's refreshing!