http://sirmeo.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sirmeo.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] artists_beware 2015-03-09 01:08 am (UTC)

Here is mine: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1TaIBuv3ulxSZhQnm5Aon1kfdRtmcn0VG7zab3npka2Q/edit

Apart from the loophole/things I've missed, I'm also interested in hearing about its readability; I'm not a native English speaker and I do have a nasty tendency to use syntax from my native language, and make long, run on sentences, which can be confusing.
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