http://bluefantasyz.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] bluefantasyz.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] artists_beware 2014-05-16 06:22 am (UTC)

I would super love a critique. I wrote this all out on paper before typing it up, to make sure I didn't miss anything. But another set of eyes would always be helpful.

http://fav.me/d5yu4ew

Edited to change my picture derp :P
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