i had a bit of an issue opening your file (i don't use word, so had to finagle it into the program i use and it looked pretty slaughtered once i opened it, so you may want to consider not offering it as a file but as a webpage)
but once i got that squared away yours was very easy to navigate. the only thing i can say is that your verbage of "caught" several times at the end makes me feel a little uneasy, as if you are expecting your commissioners to be thieves. perhaps simply go with "you may not create prints for financial gain or promotional work, as this negates my rights as an artist" or something similar, for every instance of "caught."
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Date: 2013-09-13 03:49 pm (UTC)but once i got that squared away yours was very easy to navigate. the only thing i can say is that your verbage of "caught" several times at the end makes me feel a little uneasy, as if you are expecting your commissioners to be thieves. perhaps simply go with "you may not create prints for financial gain or promotional work, as this negates my rights as an artist" or something similar, for every instance of "caught."